Throughout this developmental journey of writing my essay, I have been able to explore myself and my writing style. It has led from a draft in which had many errors and non-clarified information to a smoother and more refined final essay in which I can be proud to say that reflects me. I was able to expand on my details within my essay due to the feedback given for example when taking my introduction into consideration you can see that in the draft; I lack details such as when talking to the older woman I met on the plane I was able to expand on our conversation and give context to it which directly allowed for me to expand on other aspects of the essay such as my confusion within the fact that though we both spoke the same langue why was I having such an issue with understanding her. The feedback has allowed me to edit the way the essay was structured and allowed me to add a better flow within the body of the essay by. I was able to embed elements of my life within the drafts texts and edit to allow for the same feeling but with added structure and developmental flow that expanded on my emotions and goals within life such as wanting to become a politician to fight for change. When reading the draft after receiving feedback on the end of the essay I was able to rewrite it in a format that correlated with the overall essay theme rather than seeing more so like a random escaped thought.